Mount Kinablu

Mount Kinabalu in Malaysia is 4,095 meters above sea level and is one of the tallest mountains in Southeast Asia. There are a variety of reasons why I would like to go to Mount Kinabalu, one of the reasons is it just seems like a cool place to go. I also think it would be an interesting experience to go mountain climbing for the first time on one of Southeast Asia's tallest mountains. Mount Kinabalu is also one of the biggest tourist attractions in Sabah. The villagers living at the bottom of Mount Kinabalu still perform Animist rituals even though the village is being developed.                                                                             

Temples of Bagan

One of the most coolest and beautiful you will ever see in my opinion will be the Temples in Bagan. So real quick before we will begin I want point out that I will be trying to improve my word choice, so better be looking out for examples of that! To start out there where actually a total of 13,000 of these but sadly there are only 2,000 of those still standing today, but is still a really shocking sight to see. If you do happen to visit these temples I would recommend going from November through February because at other times of the years it can get up to an unsustainable 110 degrees. Also one of the most famous temples was built in 1091 A.D. by King Kyanzittha and soars 51 meters in the sky. So my question is, would you visit this place even during the 110 degree season?

Sunrise in the ring of fire

Mount Bromo a volcano that's part of the ring of fire (a huge group of volcanoes) is known worldwide for its beautiful sunrises. It covers a distance of 800 kilometers and is part of the Bromo Tengger Semeru National Park. I'd like to visit this place because it just sounds so beautiful plus the fact that I used to be obsessed with volcanoes.(After reading the wolves of the beyond series.) I also think it would just be amazing to get there early enough to see the sunrise. I was looking at pictures of the national park and there are a bunch of geysers and other amazing pictures and that sentence probably sounded really girly in retrospect.

Something I'd like to work on is capitalization and punctuation. I tend to put the wrong one in the wrong place and without grammar check I'd probs mess-up on every sentence.

Beautiful Sunsets and 2,000 Temples? Only in Asia Certified for Sure

For this article I chose to focus on using the correct "there" or "their".
   The temples and pagoda at Bagan, Myanmar are world renowned for their intense beauty of themselves and the sunsets that surround them.  Myanmar is located next to Thailand and Bangladesh. Myanmar's crown jewel is Bagan, located in Bagan there is 2,000 over Pagoda's (a type of Buddhist temple for the lazy ones)  and temples covering over 42 square miles, but the temples are not just Myanmar's crown jewel. Its sunsets are also know for their spectacular beauty.  There are many ways to explore Bagan but one of coolest in my opinion is they offer hot air balloon rides where on a clear day you can see the sunset unfold in front of you laying out all of what Bagan has to offer. What do you think if you could go anywhere in Asia is Bagan now one of those options?

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The Exhilarating Sunrise over The Steep Mountains!

I would love to go and see the breathtaking view of Bromo-Tenegger- Semuru National Park in Indonesia! I have never been to a National park and it would seem like a beautiful place to go. I would especially want to see Mount Bromo, one of the most stunning mountain to watch a sunrise, lets just say if there was an award for sunrises over mountains, Mount Bromo would hands down win first place. While I’m there I’d love to watch the sunrise, but afterwards, after I push through the many tourists, I would love to see the sunset, then go back home and tell everybody about the exciting, breathtaking view and experience! What would you want to see in the National Park.

I would like to improve on capitalizing and putting apostrophes in the correct places

Thailand beaches

I would like to visit the beaches of Thailand because they are beautiful, however I would like to visit more is the city of Bangkok because it is a very beautiful city that I was told that it was on of the coolest city in Thailand. Bangkok, one of the better known countries in the world. The average temperature  stays the same throughout the summer and winter as an average 80 degrees. It would be interesting to see the things that they have there. There are 50 districts in Bangkok. In Thailand more than a small amount of the population speaks Chinese. Would you visit Thailand? I have a hard time with good work choice.

Luang Prabang, Laos

           The place I would like to visit more than all of the other beautiful choices shown would definitely have to be Luang Prabang, Laos. I choose that because I love waterfalls and the sound of them. I also found some information that makes me want to visit that place even more. The first thing that caught my eye was the word coffee, then I read on and found out about their scents. There it smells like pure nature (even though I have really bad allergies I still love that smell), unlike here. For example, here It smells like fast food and McDonald's, which is not fast food its fat food. Anyways, another thing that grabbed my interest was the designs there. They look as beautiful and amazing as they sound. They're circled by mountains, and they have rooftops that glimmer in the sunlight which sounds really pretty to see. The river is also an attraction.  The first would be their colour. I also love that there are several waterfalls. In summary, This place would be the best place i'd ever see and I would really like it. What is your favorite place you've ever visited?

      I often struggle with word choice.