Turkey not only has a interesting name but awesome places to visit! The big country of Turkey is 302,535 sq miles in total, it's main currency is Turkish lira and language is of course Turkish.Down to the right is a building that is named The Blue Mosque, a common Tourist attraction. In Turkey there is a majority of Muslim and Sunni there is about 7 million people in Turkey . The capital is Ankara. The main industry is mining and oil production. This country suffers from some server earthquakes since it is on the plates of earth. Farming is also one of the industry in the country raising sheep , And growing tobacco and olives.
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ReplyDeleteTo be blunt, it is rushed and unformatted. It does have a lot of information though. I think you should add some of other elements into the writing. I can see it manufactures oil and olives, but the writing does not end with a question. A way of organization could be to group the governmental facts first, then agricultural and trade next. I also think the writing should talk to the reader, ask more questions or maybe just spend a whole sentence in text.
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