A Beautiful Place Called Bali

Bali is a good place for people who want to surf or for the people who just want to relax. For all of you who don't know, Bali is one of the many islands in Indonesia. The population of Bali is 3,156,392 people. Some of the people there speak Balinese, Indonesian or English. Bali is mostly famous for its scrumptious food, friendly people and perfect sandy beaches. Would you like to go to Bali one day?
I usually struggle with word choice. Every time I learn a new word I will try to use it in a sentence to make sure I know what it means and I end up not making sense. I also need to sometimes stop using words that mean the same thing. Last I repeat the same words, so I could stop that.